Thursday, 6 July 2017

Zara's biography

The last 2 weeks we have been working on our  biographies in writing. We  have learnt that 3 sentences at least for one paragraph,  we have learnt how to wrap up our writing with conclusion, I found writing and researching about my singer.
Here is a link to my video .Check out my video and please comment below . By Zara

26 comments:

  1. Kia ora Ruma Rima,
    My name is Tania and I am a Manaiakalani Outreach Facilitator. I live in Whangarei which is at the top of the North Island, a long way away from where you live on the West Coast. I am lucky enough to be involved with Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu which means I get to check out your blog on a regular basis and leave you comments too. This is my first visit to your blog! I look forward to following your learning. Thanks Zara for sharing your biography of Stan Walker. I had forgotten that Stan was a winner in Australian Idol. Why did you choose to learn more about Stan Walker? What is your favourite song?
    Ngā mihi nui
    Tania

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    1. hi my name is zara my favourite songs is the new zealand song from stan walker

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  2. Kia ora Ruma Rima,
    My name is Samuel and I am a student at St Pius X. The video was amazing I loved watching it.

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  3. Kia Orana Ruma Rima,

    My name is Lusia and i'm a year 8 student
    from St Pius X Catholic School.
    Wow you guys been working on biographies in writing! That's incredible, My Learning Space has been working on report writing!
    I suggest on your next post, you should create a DLO of your learning about your biographies!

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  8. Hi Ruma Rima,
    The video was great and i really enjoyed watching your video.

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  9. Hi Ruma Rima,
    My name is Mei I am from saint pius and I really enjoyed watching your video.

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  10. thank you for posting on the class blog

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  11. Hi Ruma Rima,
    My name is Viane, I am a year 7 Student at St Pius X School.I really enjoy wataching you little video.Keep up the great work.

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  12. Thank you for posting on your class blog.

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  13. Hello Zara my name is Andre and Im from Hornby High School and I was listing and reading the video and at the point it says "of the Australian idol" you said the American when it says Australian but overall it was a good video keep it up from Andre

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  14. Thank you i will keep the good work up and also i have a blog leave a comment on my blog

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  15. Hi there my name is Malachi i'm from saint piusx cathloic school nice work keep it up

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  16. Hello Zara
    My name is Henrietta and I go to Saint Pius x Catholic School. I really like watching the Video it was really great and how intersting that you guys are working on biographies in writing!

    Keep up the awsome work!

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  17. thanks for the commenting on our class blog
    from Zara from Paparoa Range School

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  18. Hi Zara,
    I like your video because it was really interesting. In the video I liked how you were talking nice and clear. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information. Overall you did a good job.

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  19. Hi Zara,
    I like your video because it was really interesting. In the video I liked how you were talking nice and clear. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information. Overall you did a good job.

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  20. Malo Leli Zara.
    I really enjoy your video it is really intersting to watch. The way that you were sharing your thoughts and the way that you explained it with a clear voice was Good!

    Keep it up!!

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  21. Kia Orana Ruma Rima,

    My name is Mei and i'm a year 7 student
    from St Pius X Catholic School.
    Wow you guys been working on biographies in writing! That's incredible, My Learning Space has been working on report writing!
    I suggest on your next post, you should create a DLO of your learning about your biographies!

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  22. Kia Ora Room 5
    I like how you made a biography about Stan Walker. I forgot that he won Australian Idol.
    Also Thank you for doing the Tuhi Mai, Tuhi Atu program with us we had a great time commenting on your blog and receiving comments from you.
    Have a Merry Christmas and a great holiday!
    Remember to keep on publishing!

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