Tēnā Koutou, welcome to our class blog. We are a Year 5 and 6 learning class at our Dobson school site near Greymouth, New Zealand. Whaea Grace is our teacher.
Hi I am Juliet from parkview parua school and I find it really interesting how you got to make the care packages and make letters. Something you could work on is maybe adding more infomation. But overall it is really cool.
Kia Ora, Ella here from Parkview Parua School. Fantastic Blog post! I really like all the picture showing your bloggers what you are doing! Also the writing over top of each picture showing what you are doing in each picture! How long were you at camp? Was it fun? Did you learn a lot about the war? It looks very fun and hopefully one day I could do that. Would you like to go again? Maybe something you could work on is telling us how much fun you had and reflecting on it at the end of the presentation. Other than that, I think this presentation is amazing! I hoped you guys had lots of fun while you were there! If you would like to check out my blog just click on my name above my comment.
kia ora my is Jordan from parkviewparua school i really like reading about the ww1 maybe next time you could add same picturesand the facts you are use are great it made me think back to ww1 and make sure you use capital letter
Kia Ora Ruma Rima, I'm Cybella from Parkview Parua school. I really like your post! You've added lost of interesting information and lots of photos to explain about what you did. I learn't lots of interesting facts about the war while reading this post. I wish we could do this at our camp because it sounds like lots of fun! How many days did you do this for? And did you split up into teams? Maybe something to work on for next time is to explain more of the battle you did and how it went. Other than that I really enjoyed your post! Keep up the great work! -Cybella (Be sure to check out my blog!)
Kia Ora Ruma Rima! I am Piper from parkview Parua School. I really enjoyed looking at the pictures and reading about what you have learnt. It was very interesting! This reminds me of last year. When we learnt about world wars. Maybe next time you could add in the opinions of some of the kids. Apart from that, it was interesting! -Piper
KIA ORA Ruma Rima school Lydia here,from Parkview Parua school I like how you used lots of props at your camp.It looks like that you guys had a lot of fun I wish i was there.
Hi i'm Katie from Parkview Parua school I like how you put in lots of photos it and explained what you did. It reminded me of the first time I went to camp. Maybe next time you could tell us how much you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed reading about what you did at camp.
Kia ora Paparoa room Rima, My name is Kayla. I think it's really cool that you did stuff on camp to do with WW1. Did you research all the information? How long were you on camp for? It looks like a lot of fun. Next time you could maybe tell us where you got all your information from.
My name is Jorja. I like the way you have done a subheading so when someone is reading it they now what the subject is about. Did you think about putting what WW1 stands for and, what you liked or what you didn't like, what was the most enjoyed activity? Next time you could have the W.A.L.T what most people found hard or what they enjoyed/found easy.
Greetings Ruma Rima, I am a student in Kotuku from Parkview Paroa School!. You guys must of learnt alot about WW1 to reenact what some of the soldiers had to bare through. You guys look like you had alot of fun was this just daily thing, and how long did this go for (if it was more than a day). Maybe on slide seven maybe just summerise it a bit more better (not as a bad thing) but it was abit too long. Anyways this was a really good blog post and I enjoyed reading every part of it. I wish I could do that someday Guyan,
Hello Ruma Rima! My name is Topaz from Parkview Parua School. I really enjoyed looking at all the photos and reading all about the world war 1 reading the first slide made me want to keep reading. It reminded me of when i was at my old school we learnt A LOT about the world wars and how many people died. It's amazing how you got all this information about what they did and what happened. Maybe next time you could think about putting more information about the war. Also tell your readers how hard it was to dig the trench. Other than that this is an amazing piece of work. here is the link to my blog if you want to check it out https://pvstopazt.blogspot.com/ Thank you!
Ni hau I am Ethan From Parkview Parua school I like all the props and all the effort you put into this slideshow. Maybe next time you could double check your information, like The year after the first world war was 1919 not 1916. Overall great job it looked like you had lots of fun I wish I was there. -Ethan
Hello Room 5, My name is Lucas from Parkview Parua School. I noticed you posted something recently so I decided to have a look. I am outstanding by the amount of detail you included. The camp trip you took looked really fun, Despite all of the gunfire and bodies It looked like you had a lot of fun too. Some of the information was too small, Like on slide nine. But above all It's a great post. I hope to see more great work from you. Sincerely Lucas.
Kia Ora Ruma Rima My name is Tai from Parkview Parua School. I really like all the pictures and comments that was on the slideshow I am very intersted in the war and all the facts about it,Mabey next time you could get the kids to write in the slideshow and see what they think but apart from that It was very good.
Hello room rima my name is Rhys from parkview para school. Looks like you guys had fun. Wish i could be there i have a camp coming up soon anyway. I like the pictures you put. You could put a better title. Awesome post i really liked it. Go check out my blog and my class blog here are the links. http://pvsrhysr.blogspot.com/ http://parkviewparuakotuku.blogspot.com/
Kia ora ruma rima.my name is Jakson from parkview parua school i really liked your blog post when you were at camp with your class at shantytown it looked liked you had fun i have camp comeing up i very liked my camp last year but you could put in more feed back how the kids liked camp.from Jackson.
hello Ruma Rima My name is Jessie i am from Parkview Parua School. i loved that you learn't about world war 1. this took me back to when i did a role play about world war one. i think you could add more photos and smaller paragraphs
Hello room five my name is Riley from parkview parua school.I really liked the no mans land part of your camp it looked fun the pictures look good my camp is faraway and this remind me of my camp the side show is good but not much text but the rest is good.From Riley
I really enjoyed reading about your blog about the Shantytown camp it looked like lots of fun. Maybe next time you could add some stories from the kids about what they liked most about the camp.
Hi Ruma Rima, My name is Heidi, and i'm a year 8, from parkview parua school. I enjoyed looking at your post! Your camp looks so fun! Did you sleep in cabins, or tents, or just on the ground? Did you take turns having a go at being a soldier, a nurse, and a stretcher bearer? I remember at my camp, we played a game called colors, which is pretty similar in a way. We had three teams, red, blue, yellow. Yellow went after blue, blue went after red, red went after yellow. It was really fun. If we got captured we had to change to that team. It was really easy to read and understand. Maybe you could add more about what you had for dinner, what you had to bring, ect, ect. I don't go to camp till october, which is pretty sad. It looks like you had a SUPER fun anzac experience.If you would like to visit my blog, type pvsheidih.blogspot.com in your search bar. Have a really nice day. -Heidi
kia ora ruma rima. my name is Noah from parkivew parua school i did not hafe of that staff in ww1. i loved that learnt that staff about ww1 i didn't i think you can improve foll stops.
Kia Ora Ruma Rima! My name is Natalia From Parkview Parua Primary & Intermediate school!😁 I really like this blog post! This camp looks like it was extremely fun and interesting! I like how you added information for each photo so we knew what was going on! This reminds me when i went to my camp! next time you could improve with some more full stops? -Kind regards, Natalia
Kia Ora Room 5, I really like what you did and how you learned about the war and how you did different activities to do and link with the world war. I think you should have done more photos, because I love all the things you did and I want to see more. I hope you have a fantastic year. I also hope to see more blog posts this term.
Greetings Ruma Rima, My Name is Alex and I am a student in Kotuku team from Parkview Pārua School. You guys must of learnt alot about WW1 to reenact what some of the soldiers had to bare through. You guys look like you had alot of fun was this just daily thing, and how long did this go for (if it was more than a day). Maybe on slide seven maybe just summarise it just a bit better but it was a bit too long. Anyways this was a really good blog post and I enjoyed reading every part of it. Anyway for now goodbye, Kind regards, Alex
Hi Ruma Rima, My name is Ramario, and i'm a year 7, from parkview parua school. I enjoyed looking at your post! Your camp looks so fun! Did you sleep in cabins, or tents, or just on the ground? Did you take turns having a go at being a soldier, a nurse, and a stretcher bearer? I remember at my camp, we played a game called colors, which is pretty similar in a way. We had three teams, red, blue, yellow. Yellow went after blue, blue went after red, red went after yellow. It was really fun. If we got captured we had to change to that team. It was really easy to read and understand. Maybe you could add more about what you had for dinner, what you had to bring, ect, ect. I don't go to camp till october, which is pretty sad. It looks like you had a SUPER fun anzac experience.If you would like to visit my blog, type pvsheidih.blogspot.com in your search bar. Have a really nice day.
hi my name is lochy and i go to paparoarange.school.nz and i am a year 7 thank you for this help full comment Ramario we hope you have fun on your camp i hope haved lots of fun and we eacth were in a grop and we hade a tern being a soldier and a stretcher bearer.
Hola Ruma Rima my name is Jessie and I go to parkview purua school.I love going on camps with tents and other camp stuff. I love the way that you put the photos and the text that matched with the pic if you want to look at my blog https://pvsjessiej.blogspot.com/
Hi I am Juliet from parkview parua school and I find it really interesting how you got to make the care packages and make letters. Something you could work on is maybe adding more infomation. But overall it is really cool.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Izaak I am a student from Paparoa Range School Ruma Rima. Thank you for your thoughtful and helpful comment.
DeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteElla here from Parkview Parua School.
Fantastic Blog post! I really like all the picture showing your bloggers what you are doing! Also the writing over top of each picture showing what you are doing in each picture! How long were you at camp? Was it fun? Did you learn a lot about the war? It looks very fun and hopefully one day I could do that. Would you like to go again? Maybe something you could work on is telling us how much fun you had and reflecting on it at the end of the presentation.
Other than that, I think this presentation is amazing! I hoped you guys had lots of fun while you were there!
If you would like to check out my blog just click on my name above my comment.
Sincerely,
Ella.
kia ora my is Jordan from parkviewparua school i really like reading about the ww1 maybe next time you could add same picturesand the facts you are use are great it made me think back to ww1 and make sure you use capital letter
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ruma Rima,
ReplyDeleteI'm Cybella from Parkview Parua school. I really like your post! You've added lost of interesting information and lots of photos to explain about what you did. I learn't lots of interesting facts about the war while reading this post. I wish we could do this at our camp because it sounds like lots of fun! How many days did you do this for? And did you split up into teams? Maybe something to work on for next time is to explain more of the battle you did and how it went. Other than that I really enjoyed your post! Keep up the great work!
-Cybella (Be sure to check out my blog!)
Kia Ora Ruma Rima!
ReplyDeleteI am Piper from parkview Parua School.
I really enjoyed looking at the pictures and reading about what you have learnt. It was very interesting! This reminds me of last year. When we learnt about world wars. Maybe next time you could add in the opinions of some of the kids. Apart from that, it was interesting!
-Piper
KIA ORA Ruma Rima school
ReplyDeleteLydia here,from Parkview Parua school
I like how you used lots of props at your camp.It looks like that you guys had a lot of fun I wish i was there.
hello,
ReplyDeleteKyrah here from parkview parua school
l like that you used lots of info and pictures,and that you had lots of fun wish l was there.
Hi i'm Katie from Parkview Parua school
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in lots of photos it and explained what you did. It reminded me of the first time I went to camp. Maybe next time you could tell us how much you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed reading about what you did at camp.
Kia ora Paparoa room Rima,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kayla. I think it's really cool that you did stuff on camp to do with WW1. Did you research all the information? How long were you on camp for? It looks like a lot of fun. Next time you could maybe tell us where you got all your information from.
Kind regards,
Kayla
Kia Ora Paparoa Room Rima
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jorja. I like the way you have done a subheading so when someone is reading it they now what the subject is about. Did you think about putting what WW1 stands for and, what you liked or what you didn't like, what was the most enjoyed activity? Next time you could have the W.A.L.T what most people found hard or what they enjoyed/found easy.
Kind regards
Jorja
Greetings Ruma Rima, I am a student in Kotuku from Parkview Paroa School!. You guys must of learnt alot about WW1 to reenact what some of the soldiers had to bare through. You guys look like you had alot of fun was this just daily thing, and how long did this go for (if it was more than a day). Maybe on slide seven maybe just summerise it a bit more better (not as a bad thing) but it was abit too long. Anyways this was a really good blog post and I enjoyed reading every part of it. I wish I could do that someday
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Hello Ruma Rima!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Topaz from Parkview Parua School.
I really enjoyed looking at all the photos and reading all about the world war 1 reading the first slide made me want to keep reading. It reminded me of when i was at my old school we learnt A LOT about the world wars and how many people died. It's amazing how you got all this information about what they did and what happened. Maybe next time you could think about putting more information about the war. Also tell your readers how hard it was to dig the trench. Other than that this is an amazing piece of work.
here is the link to my blog if you want to check it out https://pvstopazt.blogspot.com/ Thank you!
Ni hau
ReplyDeleteI am Ethan From Parkview Parua school I like all the props and all the effort you put into this slideshow. Maybe next time you could double check your information, like The year after the first world war was 1919 not 1916.
Overall great job it looked like you had lots of fun I wish I was there.
-Ethan
Hello Room 5, My name is Lucas from Parkview Parua School. I noticed you posted something recently so I decided to have a look. I am outstanding by the amount of detail you included. The camp trip you took looked really fun, Despite all of the gunfire and bodies It looked like you had a lot of fun too. Some of the information was too small, Like on slide nine. But above all It's a great post. I hope to see more great work from you. Sincerely Lucas.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ruma Rima
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tai from Parkview Parua School.
I really like all the pictures and comments that was on the slideshow I am very intersted in the war and all the facts about it,Mabey next time you could get the kids to write in the slideshow and see what they think but apart from that It was very good.
-Tai
Hello room rima my name is Rhys from parkview para school. Looks like you guys had fun. Wish i could be there i have a camp coming up soon anyway. I like the pictures you put. You could put a better title. Awesome post i really liked it. Go check out my blog and my class blog here are the links. http://pvsrhysr.blogspot.com/ http://parkviewparuakotuku.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteKia ora ruma rima.my name is Jakson from parkview parua school i really liked your blog post when you were at camp with your class at shantytown it looked liked you had fun i have camp comeing up i very liked my camp last year but you could put in more feed back how the kids liked camp.from Jackson.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Jessie i am from Parkview Parua School.
i loved that you learn't about world war 1. this took me back to when i did a role play about world war one. i think you could add more photos and smaller paragraphs
Hello room five my name is Riley from parkview parua school.I really liked the no mans land part of your camp it looked fun the pictures look good my camp is faraway and this remind me of my camp the side show is good but not much text but the rest is good.From Riley
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading about your blog about the Shantytown camp it looked like lots of fun. Maybe next time you could add some stories from the kids about what they liked most about the camp.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruma Rima,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Heidi, and i'm a year 8, from parkview parua school.
I enjoyed looking at your post! Your camp looks so fun! Did you sleep in cabins, or tents, or just on the ground? Did you take turns having a go at being a soldier, a nurse, and a stretcher bearer? I remember at my camp, we played a game called colors, which is pretty similar in a way. We had three teams, red, blue, yellow. Yellow went after blue, blue went after red, red went after yellow. It was really fun. If we got captured we had to change to that team. It was really easy to read and understand. Maybe you could add more about what you had for dinner, what you had to bring, ect, ect. I don't go to camp till october, which is pretty sad. It looks like you had a SUPER fun anzac experience.If you would like to visit my blog, type pvsheidih.blogspot.com in your search bar. Have a really nice day.
-Heidi
Kia ora joela my name is Dustyn from parkview parua school I really like world war 1 travel at camp it was really cool and I love detall
ReplyDeletekia ora ruma rima. my name is Noah from parkivew parua school i did not hafe of that staff in ww1. i loved that learnt that staff about ww1 i didn't i think you can improve foll stops.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ruma Rima! My name is Natalia From Parkview Parua Primary & Intermediate school!😁 I really like this blog post! This camp looks like it was extremely fun and interesting! I like how you added information for each photo so we knew what was going on! This reminds me when i went to my camp! next time you could improve with some more full stops?
ReplyDelete-Kind regards, Natalia
Kia Ora Room 5,
ReplyDeleteI really like what you did and how you learned about the war and how you did different activities to do and link with the world war.
I think you should have done more photos, because I love all the things you did and I want to see more.
I hope you have a fantastic year.
I also hope to see more blog posts this term.
Greetings Ruma Rima,
ReplyDeleteMy Name is Alex and I am a student in Kotuku team from Parkview Pārua School. You guys must of learnt alot about WW1 to reenact what some of the soldiers had to bare through. You guys look like you had alot of fun was this just daily thing, and how long did this go for (if it was more than a day). Maybe on slide seven maybe just summarise it just a bit better but it was a bit too long. Anyways this was a really good blog post and I enjoyed reading every part of it.
Anyway for now goodbye,
Kind regards,
Alex
Hi Ruma Rima,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ramario, and i'm a year 7, from parkview parua school.
I enjoyed looking at your post! Your camp looks so fun! Did you sleep in cabins, or tents, or just on the ground? Did you take turns having a go at being a soldier, a nurse, and a stretcher bearer? I remember at my camp, we played a game called colors, which is pretty similar in a way. We had three teams, red, blue, yellow. Yellow went after blue, blue went after red, red went after yellow. It was really fun. If we got captured we had to change to that team. It was really easy to read and understand. Maybe you could add more about what you had for dinner, what you had to bring, ect, ect. I don't go to camp till october, which is pretty sad. It looks like you had a SUPER fun anzac experience.If you would like to visit my blog, type pvsheidih.blogspot.com in your search bar. Have a really nice day.
hi my name is lochy and i go to paparoarange.school.nz and i am a year 7 thank you for this help full comment Ramario we hope you have fun on your camp i hope haved lots of fun and we eacth were in a grop and we hade a tern being a soldier and a stretcher bearer.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Perez from Parkview Parua,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you had a great time and learned lots of things. Keep up the great blogging.
Hola Ruma Rima
ReplyDeletemy name is Jessie and I go to parkview purua school.I love going on camps with tents and other camp stuff. I love the way that you put the photos and the text that matched with the pic
if you want to look at my blog https://pvsjessiej.blogspot.com/
Kia ora ruma rima
ReplyDeletemy name is lachlan from parkview parua school. i really liked how you guys dressed up as soldiers.