Tēnā Koutou, welcome to our class blog. We are a Year 5 and 6 learning class at our Dobson school site near Greymouth, New Zealand. Whaea Grace is our teacher.
Hi Ruma Rima, my name is Aysha from Parkview Parua School. I like how you included information as to why you hosted the wheels and mufti day. This reminded me of when I was younger and went to my school's wheels day. But what gave you the idea to host a wheels day and mufti day and not something else? Overall, it seemed real fun and it looks like everyone enjoyed it as well.
Ki ora Paparoa range school I think you guys a doing the right think. I like the way you guys a having fundraise and giveing the money to help the worm farm.You have taught me to help people and donate my money. Next time you could and the worm farms name. But it was really great and keep up the great work.
Ki ora Ruma Rima I am Finau from parkview Parua school. I like the way you guys a having fundraise and giveing the money to help the worm farm.You have taught me to help people and donate my money. Next time you could and the worm farms name. But it was really great and keep up the great work.
Hi Ruma Rima, It looks like you had fun fundraising money for your worm farm ,you earned a lot of money. This reminded me of when our school had fundraising for camp trips. Next time you could add more info about it.
Kia Ora Room 5,I am from Parkview Pārua School, I liked the way you raised it for a worm farm. You brought me back when I use to do mufti day. Why did you raised it for a worm farm?, why not for something else?. What activities/courses did you do?.
Kia Ora Joela i really like your post about wheels and mufti day ive done a mufti day before but did you think about adding more context about what you did on the day but it was good.
I like your blog because it's helpful to others and you guys work hard at school. I hope you get your Wind Farm can you please put a picture on the blog
Ki ora Ruma Rima iḿ ramario from parkview parkview parua school your blog is really good because all the slides you´s mad make it look really interesting. Maybe you can put a photo of the worm farm i hope we get a worm farm in our school. Ramario
I like your blog post because it's helpful and positive to others and you guys put lots of work hard at school.I hope you get enough money to afford you dream can you please put a picture on the blog
hello it is seb from parkview parua school i really like how you let the kids have a mufti day and wheel day. its smart to get them to pay money. cause they love it. and one thing you could do with your photos is try to get them in better quality its hard to in some of the photos. well anywasy i love youre posts. byeaツ
Hello Ruma Rima, I am Rebekah form Parkview Parua school. I like how you said "why we did a mufti and wheels day" Rather than just saying that you had one. I like you explained that the money was going towards a new worm farm. I think you probably should have said why you wanted the worm farm, was the old one broken? Did you not have one in the first place? These courses look like a lot of fun! -Rebekah
Ki Ora Ruma Rima! I'm Cybella from Parkview Parua school from the Kotuku Team! It looks like you had fun fundraising for your worm farm. I really like how at the end you put lots of pictures in to show what you did, its good you put lots of information. As a suggestion try put the different activities you did for the wheels day and how you raised the money. Keep up the great work! -Cybella (Feel free to comment on my blog by clicking on my name tag!)
Hello Ruma Rima my name is Kyrah from Parkview Parua school l really like the way that you let the kids have a wheels day. it looks like so much fun wish l could be there.
Kia Ora Izaak, Oliver and Wilem. My name is Ella from Parkview Parua School. This is a really great slide, (and fantastic photos in it!) I really like the information that you put into it, and also how you posted it to explain what you did at school and why. It was fantastic! Have you ever thought about putting more photos on one slide? How long did it take to make this slide? Did you like how it ended up? Something that you could work on is making the slides go to one another a bit faster, but other than that I think it was amazing and very interesting!
If you would like to check out my blog you could click on my name above the comment! Have a fantastic day!
Kia Ora Room 5. My name is Kody from parkview parua school I really hope that money helped for the worm farm. I like that you had a wheels and mufti day I like the photos it looked like the kids were having a lot of fun. Maybe next time have a little more information because I would love to know more. I loved to see more kids riding scooters because I am a scooter rider myself. Awsome post see you later Kody.
Hi Ruma Rima I'm Ammalina from Parkview school. Your wheels day looked so fun! I like how the photos showed that everyone was having a great time. It made think of when I had a wheels day at my preschool :D. Maybe you could of put more information like some comments from the students and some photos of the worm farm that you got. What made you think of getting worm farms? How much money did you have to pay to dress up in mufti? Overall the wheels day looked like a great success. Byeeeee.
Hi Ruma Rima I'm Tessa from Parkview School. Your wheels day looked so fun and exciting. I like how the kids looked like they were having so much fun. It's really cool that you got $66.10 out of that. but maybe next time you could put how much you got from the mufti day and how much the mufti was. anyway the blog post was very good.
Hi Ruma Rima I'm Lydia from Parkview school. Your wheels day looked so much fun and Awesome.I like how the kids looked like they were having a lot of fun. It's really cool that you got $66.10 out of that. but maybe next time you could put how much you got from the mufti day and how much the mufti was. anyway the blog post was very good. Thanks Lydia
Hi Ruma Rima, my name is Aysha from Parkview Parua School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you included information as to why you hosted the wheels and mufti day. This reminded me of when I was younger and went to my school's wheels day. But what gave you the idea to host a wheels day and mufti day and not something else? Overall, it seemed real fun and it looks like everyone enjoyed it as well.
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ReplyDeleteKi ora Paparoa range school I think you guys a doing the right think. I like the way you guys a having fundraise and giveing the money to help the worm farm.You have taught me to help people and donate my money. Next time you could and the worm farms name. But it was really great and keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteKi ora Ruma Rima I am Finau from parkview Parua school. I like the way you guys a having fundraise and giveing the money to help the worm farm.You have taught me to help people and donate my money. Next time you could and the worm farms name. But it was really great and keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruma Rima, It looks like you had fun fundraising money for your worm farm ,you earned a lot of money. This reminded me of when our school had fundraising for camp trips. Next time you could add more info about it.
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Kia Ora Room 5,I am from Parkview Pārua School, I liked the way you raised it for a worm farm. You brought me back when I use to do mufti day. Why did you raised it for a worm farm?, why not for something else?. What activities/courses did you do?.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Joela i really like your post about wheels and mufti day ive done a mufti day before but did you think about adding more context about what you did on the day but it was good.
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I like your blog because it's helpful to others and you guys work hard at school. I hope you get your Wind Farm can you please put a picture on the blog
ReplyDeleteKi ora Ruma Rima iḿ ramario from parkview parkview parua school your blog is really good because all the slides you´s mad make it look really interesting. Maybe you can put a photo of the worm farm i hope we get a worm farm in our school.
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I like your blog post because it's helpful and positive to others and you guys put lots of work hard at school.I hope you get enough money to afford you dream can you please put a picture on the blog
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ReplyDeletehello it is seb from parkview parua school i really like how you let the kids have a mufti day and wheel day. its smart to get them to pay money. cause they love it. and one thing you could do with your photos is try to get them in better quality its hard to in some of the photos. well anywasy i love youre posts. byeaツ
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ReplyDeleteHello Ruma Rima, I am Rebekah form Parkview Parua school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said "why we did a mufti and wheels day" Rather than just saying that you had one. I like you explained that the money was going towards a new worm farm. I think you probably should have said why you wanted the worm farm, was the old one broken? Did you not have one in the first place? These courses look like a lot of fun!
-Rebekah
Ki Ora Ruma Rima!
ReplyDeleteI'm Cybella from Parkview Parua school from the Kotuku Team! It looks like you had fun fundraising for your worm farm. I really like how at the end you put lots of pictures in to show what you did, its good you put lots of information. As a suggestion try put the different activities you did for the wheels day and how you raised the money. Keep up the great work!
-Cybella (Feel free to comment on my blog by clicking on my name tag!)
Hello Ruma Rima my name is Kyrah from Parkview Parua school
ReplyDeletel really like the way that you let the kids have a wheels day. it looks like so much fun wish l could be there.
Kia Ora Izaak, Oliver and Wilem.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ella from Parkview Parua School.
This is a really great slide, (and fantastic photos in it!) I really like the information that you put into it, and also how you posted it to explain what you did at school and why. It was fantastic!
Have you ever thought about putting more photos on one slide? How long did it take to make this slide? Did you like how it ended up?
Something that you could work on is making the slides go to one another a bit faster, but other than that I think it was amazing and very interesting!
If you would like to check out my blog you could click on my name above the comment!
Have a fantastic day!
Kind Regards,
Ella.
Kia Ora Room 5. My name is Kody from parkview parua school I really hope that money helped for the worm farm. I like that you had a wheels and mufti day I like the photos it looked like the kids were having a lot of fun. Maybe next time have a little more information because I would love to know more. I loved to see more kids riding scooters because I am a scooter rider myself. Awsome post see you later Kody.
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ReplyDeleteI'm Ammalina from Parkview school. Your wheels day looked so fun! I like how the photos showed that everyone was having a great time. It made think of when I had a wheels day at my preschool :D. Maybe you could of put more information like some comments from the students and some photos of the worm farm that you got. What made you think of getting worm farms? How much money did you have to pay to dress up in mufti? Overall the wheels day looked like a great success.
Byeeeee.
Hi Ruma Rima
ReplyDeleteI'm Tessa from Parkview School. Your wheels day looked so fun and exciting. I like how the kids looked like they were having so much fun. It's really cool that you got $66.10 out of that. but maybe next time you could put how much you got from the mufti day and how much the mufti was. anyway the blog post was very good.
Hi Ruma Rima
ReplyDeleteI'm Lydia from Parkview school. Your wheels day looked so much fun and Awesome.I like how the kids looked like they were having a lot of fun. It's really cool that you got $66.10 out of that. but maybe next time you could put how much you got from the mufti day and how much the mufti was. anyway the blog post was very good. Thanks Lydia
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