Sunday, 9 December 2018

WALT use metaphors in our writing.

8 comments:

  1. hi my name is Noah i am in parkview parua school and i like what you do in the Google slide because fun to look at was the slide fun to make.

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  2. Hello,my name is Dustyn from Parkview Parua School I love you blog posts it good but you should add more detail to your blog posts

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    1. my name is Dustyn
      I like that you added photos to your blog posts and a funny joke to it too.

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  3. Ki ora Ruma Rima I am Finau from parkview Parua school. I really like the way you guys show what a metaphors.You have taught me a new think that I have not learn. Why did you guys made a slide to show it but not a doc. But I really like it and enjoy reading it. I hope you guys keep up the great work.

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  4. Hello Ruma rima!
    I am Rebekah from Parkview parua school.
    I really like how you explained what a metaphor is at the start of the slide. The metaphor about the jungle gym reminds me of some of my friends! Maybe next time Check if some one else has done the same example as what you're doing, other wise it gets quite repetitive.Apart from that I think your metaphors are pretty cool.
    -Rebekah

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  5. Hello Ruma rima!
    I'm Sari from parkview parua school. I loved your metaphors, every single one of them. I also think you did a great good of explaining metaphors at the start. Maybe next time you could put the tittle and the explanation on different pages because it just makes your work look tidy. some of the metaphors remind me of the dress up day last year because my class looked like a zoo!
    -Sari

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  6. Kia Ora Paparoa Room Rima

    My name is Jorja. I like the way you have put the metaphors and some pictures. Did you think about putting some meaning to the metaphors? Next time you could have what some peoples favorite or least favorite? You could also have what was hard/easy?

    Kind regards
    Jorja

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  7. Kia Ora Paparoa Room Rima

    My name is Finau I like the way you said it raining cats and dogs and you did it raining cats and dogs.Keep up the great work and try your best.

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